Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，是一名高三学生。自从进入高三以来，你发现有的同学晚上学习到很晚，他们边学习边吃零食或喝可乐，早上则由于起床太晚而不吃早餐。你感觉这样会对身体有害。请你根据这种现象给《英语周报》写一封信反映上述情况，并谈谈自己的想法----虽然学习重要，但也要注意身体，同时应合理安排各科学习时间。

注意：(1) 可根据内容需要适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

(2) 词数：100左右。

(3) 参考词汇：零食snack

Dear Editor,

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I am a high school student who will graduate next year. Since I entered Grade Three, I have found that some students in our class study harder than before. They study late into night, eating snacks and drinking Coca-Coca, which is bad for their health and even leads to many students becoming fatter and fatter. In the morning , due to staying up too late, some students are not able to get up in time and often have to go to school without breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely do great harm to their health.

In my personal opinion, important as studies are, health should also be taken seriously. Faced with such heavy study pressure, not only should we try to eat in a healthy way, but we also should get as much rest as possible. Meanwhile, we should properly arrange our study time among the subjects, avoiding spending too much time on some special subjects. Only in his way can we keep fit and study effectively.

I wonder if you can agree with me. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Your faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求学生写一封信给《英语周报》，反应同学晚上学习到很晚，他们边学习边吃零食或喝可乐，早上则由于起床太晚而不吃早餐的问题。要表达出虽然学习重要，但也要注意身体，同时应合理安排各科学习时间的观点。写作时要注意运用恰当的语气，合理使用高级词汇和短语，合理安排文章的段落布局，避免低级错误。

【亮点说明】文章结构安排合理，先写出了学生晚上吃零食，不吃早饭的现象，再表达了自己对此事的看法。也使用了很好的短语和句子：entered，is bad for，leads to，due to，staying up，are not able to， get up， in time，Faced with等。同时句子有变化which is bad for their health and even leads to many students becoming fatter and fatter.以及，which is also a bad habit and will surely do great harm to their health是定语从句， not only should we try to eat in a healthy way, but we also should get as much rest as possible.运用了not only...but also...的倒装句型，Only in his way can we keep fit and study effectively.运用了only的倒装句型。