Question

假如你是李华，Tracy即将结束你们学校作为交换生的学习生活并返回英国。请你根据以下内容用英语写一篇欢送词。

1. 赞扬她的善良友好；

2. 怀念与她相处的快乐时光；

3. 感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助；

4. 希望她有机会再来中国。

注意：1. 词数：120150；

      2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear teachers and friends, I’d like to say something before Tracy goes back to England.

On one hand, Tracy is a kind and friendly girl that I feel happy to be her friend. Because of her good character she is very popular with us during her stay here. On the other hand, she gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with her. How can we forget the time that we spent together happily! I remember she doesn’t hesitate to help us whenever we have trouble in learning English. Therefore, we are grateful to Tracy from the bottom of our heart and we owe a lot of thanks to her.

True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with Tracy. I also hope that Tracy can come back to China and stay with us in the near future.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：作文是一篇材料作文，是学生熟悉的书信格式的作文，比较容易下笔。写作时，按照要求，书写规范，要包含所有的要点；内容要充实，使用丰富的词汇。注意语法和时态的正确使用。不能逐句翻译，注意语意的连贯，行文的流畅、优美。

【亮点说明】范文使用了很好的连接词，像on one hand, on the other hand等，条理清晰，衔接紧密；使用了许多短语和句型，像“hesitate to do sth; have trouble in doing sth; owe ... to”等。

考点：材料类作文