Question

假如你叫李明，学习成绩优异，家境贫困，无力承担你进入大学学习的费用。但你却有幸成为某慈善机构的资助对象。现在，你已被一所重点大学所录取，请你给该慈善机构的负责人王女士写一封感谢信。信的内容包括：
目前的生活和学习情况；
大学毕业后的人生方向；
表达感激之情。
注意：1．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．应包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
3．词数：100词左右。
Dear Ms Wang,
I’m Li Ming. Two years ago, I received your letter and schooling fees.                      
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Ms Wang,
I’m Li Ming. Two years ago, I received your letter and schooling fees. I’m very grateful for your kindness and generosity.
But for your help, I couldn't enjoy a wonderful college life in the beautiful campus right now. I’ve made a lot of friends here. Moreover, I am studying hard so as to acquire an abundant knowledeg cf English, which is my major. In fact, I’m making progress each day. Only in this way can I learn more and use what I’ve known to help those in need as well. Besides, I’m determined to go back to my hometown after graduation and devote myself to building my hometown, to make it more prosperous and beautiful.
Words seem to fail me when I try once more to express my thanks to you, and I’ll keep my promise and not let you down.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

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