Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Bill来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请按下面提示写一封电子邮件，开头已给出。

介绍情况：

1．最近发生数次雾霾天气；

2．人们已经认识到雾霾天气的危害，正采取各种举措减少其发生；

3．你自己为此做了什么或打算做什么。

注意：词数1 00个左右。

参考词汇：雾霾：smog

Dear Bill,

I'm glad to receive your letter. Thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the smog.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Bill,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d glad to tell you something about the smog.

Recently, the smog has occurred a lot of times. It has done great harm to our daily life. Many traffic accidents have taken place just because of the heavy smog and more and more people have to go to see the doctor because of the serious disease caused by the smog. Anyway, people’s life is greatly affected.

Fortunately, people have further realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment. People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the smog weather.

As for me, I’ll go to school by bike or on foot, and I won’t throw the waste anywhere. In addition, I’ll tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析:本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是关于雾霾天气的描述，根据提示，可知文章写成三段式，第一段写你家乡最近的雾霾天气，引出话题；第二段写人们意识到了雾霾的危害，以及他们所采取的一些措施；第三段写你自己的一些想法和准备付出的行动。本文宜用第一人称来描述。注意：写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：I’ll tell the people I meet to protect the environment.过去分词做后置定语：people have further realized the great harm caused by the smog。