Question

【题目】The Siberian tiger is one of the most beautiful animal in the world.

It is also one of rarest.

Today only about 1,000 are left, some of them are in the Hunchun Nature Reserve.

The Chinese government has created the reserve to help saving the tiger’s natural habitat.

But the Siberian tiger is the only endangered species.

Other famous animal in a danger is the giant panda, whose habitat is in China.

The panda was the symbol of the World Wide Fund for Nature.

Thanks of scientists’ hard work, the number of the pandas lived in the wild has increased to about 1590.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】把animal改为animals

【2】加上the

【3】把them改为which

【4】把saving去掉save

【5】加上not

【6】把other改为another

【7】把was改为is

【8】把of改为to

【9】把lived改为living

【解析】

【1】把animal改为animals；第一句one of…，…之一，一般后面接可数名词的复数形式。故把animal改为animals

【2】加上the；第二句，形容词的最高级前面要用定冠词the，表示特指。这里rarest最稀少，是rare稀少的最高级。故要加上the

【3】把them改为which；第三句后半部分是which引导的定语从句。故把them改为which

【4】把saving去掉save；第四句help saving the tiger’s natural habitat中help的用法是help （to）do sth，帮助做某事。savethe tiger’s natural habitat拯救老虎的自然栖息地。故把saving去掉save。

【5】加上not；根据后文知道大熊猫也面临危险，所以第五句But the Siberian tiger is the only endangered species. 应该是说Siberian tiger不是唯一的濒临灭绝的物种。故要加上not。

【6】把other改为another；前面讲述Siberian tiger濒临灭绝，所以这里第七句Other famous animal in a danger is the giant panda要讲述的是另一种也面临危险的动物——大熊猫。other其他的， another另一个。故把other改为another

【7】把was改为is；第七句The panda was the symbol of the World Wide Fund for Nature.

意思是：熊猫是世界自然基地的象征，这是一个一般性事实表述，应该用一般现在时。故把was改为is

【8】把of改为to；第八句中thanks to 因为，由于。Thanks to scientists’ hard work因为科学家的努力工作。故把of改为to

【9】把lived改为living；第八句the number of the pandas lived in the wild has increased to about 1590中，lived in the wild has increased to about用来修饰pandas，而熊猫与live之间是主动关系，要用现在分词形式表示主动。故把lived改为living。