Question

【题目】假定你是李华，本周日你爸爸计划组织一场家庭聚会。请你写封邮件给外教Steven,邀请他来你家一起参加。主要内容如下：

1.聚会时间和地点；

2.聚会人员介绍；

3.其他注意事项。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Steven,

I’m writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Steven,

I’m writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday. The party will begin at 5:00 pm in my home. There will be many people to show up m the party, including my parents and my sister. The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father, and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face. The girl who takes charge of cleaning is my sister. All of them can’t wait to see you.

There are other things I want to tell you. Firstly, you should take a No. 218 bus to go to my home. Secondly, I hope you can tell me the food you like, and in that ease, I can prepare it better. I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是李华，本周日你爸爸计划组织一场家庭聚会。请你写封邮件给外教Steven,邀请他来你家一起参加。注意邮件的格式和用语。考虑用一般将来时来写。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: show up出现，take charge of负责。还使用了定语从句The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father, and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face.和宾语从句Secondly, I hope you can tell me the food you like, and in that ease, I can prepare it better.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。