Question

3．你将向学校的英语网站投稿介绍年度热词"自拍照"（selfie）．
写作内容
请根据以下内容，写一篇关于自拍照的介绍．
定义：人们给自己拍的照片，通常用手机拍摄并分享到互联网上．
起源：2002年，一位澳大利亚人在某论坛上传了一张自己 的照片，并把照片称为"selfie"．
现状：（1）"selfie"以及自拍行为越来越流行；
 （2）牛津词典把"selfie"列为"2013年度词汇"．
评论：（1）自拍表达人类希望分享的需求，促进沟通；
（2）自拍让人过于在意自己的外貌，忽视内在美．
参考词汇：论坛 forum        牛津Oxford
写作要求
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容．
评分标准
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯．
定义]A"selfie"is a photo taken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．[起源]The word was first used in 2002 by an Australian who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．[现状]Since then，the popularity of the word itself and the act it describes have exploded worldwide and in 2013"selfie"was named"word of the year"by the Oxford Dictionary．[评论]Supporters believe that the taking and posting of selfies reflects the human need to connect and communicate with others．However，critics argue that selfies let people attach too much importance to appearance but little to inner beauty．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇介绍selfie的提纲类作文，内容要点包括：定义；起源；现状以及评论．
高级词汇、短语和高分句型：
accompany 动词，伴随，陪伴；
popularity 名词，流行，受欢迎；
attach too much importance to  认为…有重要性；
高分句型（一）
A"selfie"is a phototaken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．
taken和 shared 两个过去分词在句子里做后置定语修饰 a photo，表示被动；
高分句型（二）
The word ①was first used in 2002 by an Australian ②who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．
①用了被动语态；
②who引导定语从句

解答 A"selfie"is a photo①taken of oneself，usually with a cell phone，and shared online．（定义） The word was first used in 2002 by an Australian ②who posted his self-taken picture on a web forum accompanied by the caption"selfie"．（起源） Since then，the popularity of the word itself and the act it describes have exploded worldwide and in 2013"selfie"was named"word of the year"by the Oxford Dictionary．（现状） Supporters believe that the taking and posting of selfies reflects the human need to connect and communicate with others．（评论）However，critics argue that selfies let people attach too much importance to appearance but little to inner beauty．

点评 这是一篇提纲类的文章，有一定难度．考生在写作时，首先要涵盖所有要点；其次，不能简单翻译句子，要使用一些高级词汇和句式来表达．要求考生在平时学习中扩大词汇量以及储备一定量的高级句式．