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假如你是李华,在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖寻求帮助,请根据帖子内容和要求回帖。

Hi, everyone,

I’m 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn. But my mother continues to treat me as a seven-year-old. What should I do?

写作要点:

告诉Grown-up要理解母亲

给Grown-up解决问题的具体建议。

Hi, Grown-up,

As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. Here are a few suggestions.

First, it is advisable to talk more with your mom. Heart-to-heart talks can help you understand each other better. There are also opportunities to let her know your ideas and attitudes toward many things.

Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”. It is even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing, and cooking.

Hope my ideas will work.

【解析】这是一篇书信类写作,根据一封帖子写一篇回帖或说是一篇回信。围绕现在孩子与父母之间的矛盾:孩子希望独立,而父母却不放心,总觉得孩子没长大。考生在写作时要注意联系自己的生活以及周边相关例子,从而提出合理的建议,帮助Grown-up解决问题。注意写作要求,不要遗漏要点。【亮点分析】本文开篇As a student of your age, I understand your situation以身说事,感同身受,使接受建议者看了更具说服力。接着使用一个主语从句The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.阐述这一问题在青少年中是一个普遍的现象,并给出建议。文章第二段第一句First, it is advisable to talk more with your mom.使用了it作形式主语,后面的不定式作真正的主语的句型,以此作为该段的主旨句。接着使用名词短语Heart-to-heart talks:用心交流、understand each other:相互理解、ideas and attitudes toward many things:看待事情的态度和想法。既起到了给建议的作用,又使文章更加丰富。文章第三段第一句Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”.使用非谓语动词形式,立即提高了文章的档次。最后使用if引导的条件状语从句It is even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing, and cooking. 并且将给出的建议具体化,我们可以通过做家务,例如打扫卫生,洗衣洗碗。做饭来向父母证明,我们长大了。整篇文章结构严谨,在提建议时,分别使用first、second,使文章内容更清晰。总结:基本格式为first….. second……finally….(注意各种从句的应用及句型的转换和变化)

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