Question

【题目】书面表达，生活中我们都需要朋友，我们该结交怎样的朋友，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。

A true friend is a source of strength and hope.

—Jonathan Lockwood Huie

内容要求：

1．谈谈你对该引语的理解；

2．你的相关经历；

3．恰当的结尾。

注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息；

3．词数100左右。

This quotation from Jonathan Lockwood Huie tells us that_________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

This quotation from Jonathan Lockwood Huie tells us that real friends can give us strength and hope when we are in trouble and real friends can benefit from each other. We need such friends who can point out our mistakes directly and who have the same life goals as us. Once I failed again and again in my math and lost interest in it, it was my best friend who encouraged me not to give up and offered help in time. With his kind and selfless help, I gradually caught up with others.

So I say we need friends but what we need most is a friend that can rich our life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是英语应用文写作。文章要求考生根据如何结交朋友写出自己的想法。故用第一人称。文章要点全，语法知识应用灵活，且使用得当，堪称佳作。例如文中使用了in trouble，benefit from，point out，again and again，encouraged sb to do，give up，in time.，With his kind and selfish help，caught up with等短语，同时还使用了定语从句it was my best friend who encouraged me...，连词的用法也很到位，彰显作者扎实的基本功。