假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear mum and dad,
I still cannot believe that I am taking up this prize I won last year. I have to
remind yourself constantly that I am real in AD 3008. Worrying about the journey,
I was unsettled for the first a few days. As a result, I suffer from “time lag”. This
is similar with the “jet lag” you get from flying, but it seems that you keep getting
flashbacks from your previous time period. So I was very nervous and uncertain
at first. However, Wang Ping, my friend and guide, were very understanding
but gave me some green tablet which helped a lot. Well-known for their expertise,
his parents company transported me safely into the future in a time capsule.
…
Yours,
Li Qiang
1.yourself—myself
2.real—really
3.Worrying--Worried
4.去掉a
5.suffer--suffered
6.with--to
7.were--was
8.but--and
9.tablet--tablets
10.parents—parents’
【解析】
试题分析：
1.文中第二句。根据句意：我不得不一直提醒自己我真的在3008年。根据句意，我提醒的是自己而非他人，故选用反身代词myself。所以把yourself改成myself。
2.文中第二句。本句句意见上一题分析。考查副词担当状语。通过对句子的分析可知，real在此句中担当状语，应用其副词形式，故把real—really。
3.
4.文中第三句。句意见上一题分析。在最初的几天，用短语：for the first few days。不需要再使用冠词。故去掉a即可。
5.文中第四句。根据上一句I was unsettled可知，这里的时态应该确定为一般过去时。故把suffer改成suffered。
6.文中第五句。考查固定短语：be similar to，意为：和…相似。句意为：这和你坐飞机时的时间差是很相似的。故把with改成to。
7.文中第六句。本句考查主谓一致。一定要确定好主语，本句主语是Wang Ping，其后的my friend and guide是同位语，故谓语动词和Wang Ping保持一致即可。所以本句把were改成was。
8.文中第六句。考查连词的用法。前一分句意为：我的朋友和向导王平非常杰出；后一分句意为：给了我一些绿色的药片起了不少作用。两个分句之间并没有转折关系，而是并列关系，故把原句中的but改成and。
9.文中第六句。考查名词。名词tablet是可数名词，当前文有some修饰时，需要用其复数形式，故把tablet改成tablets。
10.文中最后一句。考查所有格。主语his parents和company之间存在所有关系，故用his parents’，表示他父母的公司。
考点:考查短文纠错
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2.According to Galbraith, people feel discontented because ________.
A. materialism has run wild in modern society
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B. There is more unemployment in modern society.
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4.What does Louis Uchitelle mean by “the disposable American” ?
A. People with a stable job.
B. Workers who no longer have secure jobs.
C. Those who see job stability as part of their living standard.
D. People who have a sense of security because of their rising incomes.
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B. Materialism and content.
C. A sense of self-accomplishment.
D. New anxiety, conflicts and complaints.
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