Question

9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改单句翻译，请你修改你同桌写的以下翻译．每句中只有一处错误．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改，不能改变句子原有的句型．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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71．We couldn't understand him，but through his eye we could tell what he meant．
72．He said he often felt left out，then somebody asked if people ever made fun at him．
73．We were scaring because we didn't know if the family would welcome us．
74．Our principle moved to the front of the class and we immediate fell silent，wondering what possibly could have happened．
75．The next winter，a word got around that Old Man Donovan had died．
76．I was very proud of Tommy that I decided to make a home visit to let his parents know what had been going on at school．
77．Tommy came zooming into the room in his stocking feet，taking one look at me and smiled．
78．It seems like I'm the only one of the students at school who continue to be so upset every year．
79．Perhaps it was not until that moment when Tommy recognized the effect his behavior could potentially have on others．
80．Brain explained that he had a tracking problem，and he could see better out of one eye than the other．

Answer 1

分析 十个句子主要考查名词，固定搭配，过去分词，动词时态，冠词用法，主谓一致，定语从句和宾语从句等．

解答 71．We couldn't understand him，but through his eye we could tell what he meant．
72．He said he often felt left out，then somebody asked if people ever made fun at him．
73．We were scaring because we didn't know if the family would welcome us．
74．Our principle moved to the front of the class and we immediate fell silent，wondering what possibly could have happened．
75．The next winter，a word got around that Old Man Donovan had died．
76．I was very proud of Tommy that I decided to make a home visit to let his parents know what had been going on at school．
77．Tommy came zooming into the room in his stocking feet，taking one look at me and smiled．
78．It seems like I'm the only one of the students at school who continue to be so upset every year．
79．Perhaps it was not until that moment when Tommy recognized the effect his behavior could potentially have on others．
80．Brain explained that he had a tracking problem，and∧he could see better out of one eye than the other．
详解：
71．eye改为eyes  考查名词复数．一个人的眼睛有两只，要用复数形式．                                    
72．at改为of 考查固定搭配．make fun of意为"嘲弄，取笑"，是固定搭配．                              
73．scaring改为scared 考查过去分词．过去分词作表语，多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化，其主语多半是人．
74．immediate改为immediately 考查副词．fall是动词，要用副词修饰．           
75．去掉a 考查名词．word此处意为"消息，信息"，是不可数名词，不需要冠词a．               
76．very改为so 考查固定搭配．so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副词，常常用来修饰形容词或副词，常用句型为：主语+谓语+so+adj．/adv．+that从句．
77．taking改为took 考查动词时态．and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，came，took和smiled是并列谓语，都用一般过去时态．
78．continue改为continues  考查主谓一致． 先行词the only one是单数形式，谓语动词也用单数形式．      
79．when改为that 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词that moment在从句中作时间状语，用关系副词when．
80．加that 考查连词．在宾语从句中，连词that可以省略，但有多个宾语从句并列时，第一个that可省略，其它的则不可省略．

点评 单句改错涉及词汇、语法、句型结构等方面的知识和逻辑情理的推断和综合辨析能力，是一种在较高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型．它是专门针对考生们平时学习英语过程中，尤其是写作练习中常犯的又是较为普遍的错误而设计的．