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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

Hearing the news the 2022 Winter Olympic Game would be held in China, I felt very excited. It struck to me how I learned skating when I was a child. At 7, I began to go crazier about skating, like all my friends. At the beginning, it was extremely tough of me to keep my balance. I always fall over on the ground, as a result of which, I thought I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidence and became impatient. The more impatient I was, the more terrible I did. I was about to give up but my father came to his assistance. I restored confidence and stood up again, being encouraged by him. As I practiced skating, he always created a relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice. Eventually, I made it.

Answer 1

【答案】1. news后面加that

2. Game → Games

3. to删掉或struck → occurred

4. crazier → crazy

5. for → of

6.fall → fell

7. terrible → terribly

8. but → when

9. his → my

10. being 删掉

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。当作者听说2020年冬奥会将在中国举行，他感到很兴奋。作者突然想起小时候在爸爸的鼓励下是如何学会滑冰的。

第一处：考查同位语从句。名词news后接同位语从句，从句the 2022 Winter Olympic Games would be held in China不缺少成分，且句意完整，所以用连接词that引导，不可以省略。故在news后面加that。

第二处：考查名词的数。奥林匹克比赛里面有很多项目，所以用复数games。故将Game改为Games。

第三处：考查固定句型。句意：我突然想起当我还是个孩子的时候是如何学会滑冰的。It struck sb. that ...或It occurred to sb. that …是固定句型，表示“某人突然想起……”。故将to删掉或struck改为occurred。

第四处：考查形容词。句意：7岁的时候，我开始疯狂地爱上滑冰。句中go为系动词，go crazy about为……疯狂。结合句意可知，这里不需要用比较级。故将crazier改为crazy。

第五处：考查介词。句意：一开始，我很难保持平衡。it is + adj + for sb. to do sth.常用于表示事物的特征特点；it is + adj + of sb. to do sth.一般用表示人物的性格，品德。故将for改为of。

第六处：考查时态。这里是在谈作者刚开始学滑冰时，所以应该用一般过去时态，故把fall 改成fell。

第七处：考查副词。副词修饰动词did，故把terrible 改成 terribly。

第八处：考查固定句式。be about to do sth. … when …正要做某事……，这时候……，故把but改成 when。

第九处：考查代词。句意：我正要放弃时，这时候我父亲来帮助我。结合句意可知，这里指“帮助我”，所以名词assistance前用形容词性物主代词my。故将his改为my。

第十处：考查非谓语动词。句意：在他的鼓励下，我恢复了信心，又站了起来。逻辑主语I与encourage之间为被动关系，所以用过去分词作状语。being done表示正在进行的被动动作，不可以作状语。故将being 删掉。