Question

假设你是高一新生康康，最近你们班正在就“成长的烦恼(Growing Pains)”展开讨论。请你根据以下提示，写一封信给你的外国朋友Tony，侧重告知对策内容。

烦恼	对策
1.  与朋友相处时，有些小矛盾 2.  室友有些吵闹，很难入睡 3.  考试犯错	1.  人无完人，体谅别人 2.  与室友谈心沟通，明白事理 3.  放松冷静，相信自己；请教老师，寻求帮助

1.       注意：不要逐句翻译所给信息；为使行文连贯，可适当增减细节；

2.       词数：100左右；开头与结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear Tony,

    Recently our class have talked about “Growing Pains” of students, and the main ways to deal with the problems are as follows.

Yours,

                                                       Kang Kang

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tony,

    Recently our class have talked about “Growing Pains” of students, and the main ways to deal with the problems are as follows.

Nobody is perfect. Instead of focusing on your friends’ weak points, try finding their good ones. Then you will enjoy deeper relationships.

Noisy roommates are always a problem but there are several things you can do. First of all, try talking to them. If it fails and you really suffer a lot from the noise, let your teacher know about it.

As to making mistakes in the exams, the first thing you need to do is (to) relax and have a cool head. Be confident and try your best to do well next time. Turn to your teacher if you haven’t done well.

What do you think of the ways? Looking forward to your opinions soon!

Yours,                                                        Kang kang

【解析】

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。