Question

【题目】假如你是李华，当今网络已经把世界变成了真正的“全球村”，作为一名中学生，请你给某报社写一封信，就网络对教育的影响谈谈你的看法。

要点：1.网络对教育影响的利弊各一条及你的理由；

2.你的建议一条；

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

The Internet has transformed the world into a global village, altering all aspects of our life, especially education. Here, I am writing to share my thoughts on its positive effect as well as negative one.

The most obvious advantage lies in the wide choice of courses. Learners can have access to the courses tailored for personal needs, regardless of time and space. As a result, learning occurs in such an efficient way that gaining knowledge is easiest than ever.

The downside is just as noticeable. Along with individualized courses, the Internet presents half-truths that puzzle the young minds where self-control and judging power are still forming.

Therefore, I strongly suggest that the use of the Internet should be under supervision of adults. （或者：parents and teachers should provide guidance to ensure it best serves the mental and physical growth of the teens）.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封书信，你作为一名中学生给某报社写一封信，就网络对教育的影响谈谈你的看法。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是网络对教育影响的利弊各一条及你的理由。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容符合要求，文章结构布局合理，同时文中使用高级句子。The Internet has transformed the world into a global village, altering all aspects of our life,现在分词做自然的结果状语；Learners can have access to the courses tailored for personal needs, regardless of time and space.过去分词做后置定语；learning occurs in such an efficient way that gaining knowledge is easiest than ever.此处that引导定语从句；I strongly suggest that the use of the Internet should be under supervision of adults.此处是suggest后面跟宾语从句；另外，As a result, Along with individualized courses, Therefore,等为文章增色添彩。