Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改短文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I still remember the first day I come to this new school. Everything was new to me, what made me realize I was no longer a small child. I had to depend on me. Luckily, I made several good friend. Their interests were similar with mine. I had great English teacher, Maggie. She let me know the important of English. So I decided to learn English hardly. Although it was very difficult at first, but with the help of my teacher, I made rapidly progress. Just as the old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”

Answer 1

【答案】1. come→came；2. what→which；3. me→myself；4. friend→friends；5. with→to；6. had后面加a；7. important→importance；8. hardly→hard；9. 去掉but；10. rapidly→rapid

【解析】第一处：考查时态。作者回忆了来到新学校第一天的情景。该文介绍的发生在过去的事情，故要将come改为came。

第二处：考查定语从句。“... made me realize I was no longer a small child”是非限制性定语从句，要用which在从句中作主语，代指前面一句话Everything was new to me。what不能代指前面一句话，故把what改为which。

第三处：考查代词。该句主语为“I”，句意为“我必须依靠我自己”，主语和宾语一样，故要将me改为反身代词myself。

第四处：考查名词。friend是可数名词，前面有several修饰，故要用名词复数形式。

第五处：考查介词。be similar to意为“和……相似”，是固定搭配。

第六处：考查冠词。teacher是可数名词，该处指“我”有一个好老师——Maggie，故要在had和great之间加a。

第七处：考查名词。the是定冠词，后面要接名词。the importance of English意为“英语的重要性”。

第八处：考查副词。hardly意为“几乎不”，hard意为“努力地”。该处指“我”决定努力地学习英语。故要将hardly改为hard。

第九处：考查连词。although和but不能连用。两个句子只需要一个连词。

第十处：考查形容词。progress是名词，修饰名词要用形容词。make rapid progress意为“取得快速进步”。