Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Now I’d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we had held a grown-up ceremony for our come 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an promise that as grown-up we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we expressed our thanks to our parents which had gone through hardships to bring us up and our teachers who had been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave them cards expressing their good wishes. Finally we put on wonderfully performances, singing or dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it is of great important for us. I will never forget that day in my life.

Answer 1

【答案】1.去掉 had

2. come-coming

3. an-a which-who/that

4. grown-up 改为 grown-ups

5. which-who/that

6. patient-patiently

7. them-us

8. wonderfully-wonderful

9. or-and

10. important-importance

【解析】1. 句意：在下午，我们为我们18岁的生日举行了一个成人仪式。这里在谈过去发生的一件事，所以句子用一般过去时态，故把had去掉。

2. 句意：在下午，我们为我们18岁的生日举行了一个成人仪式。形容词性物主代词our修饰名词或动名词，故把come-coming。

3. 固定搭配：make a promise许诺，promise是以辅音音素开头，故不定冠词要用a而不是an，故把an---a。

4. 句意：作为成年人，从现在起，我们应该对我们的社会有一种责任感。根据we可知此处用名词复数，故把grown-up改为grown-ups。

5. parents在此处是先行词，指人，在后面的定语从句里做主语，故把which改为who/that。

6. 副词修饰动词，故把patient-patiently。

7. 句意：我们的老师也给了我们卡片，表达他们的美好愿望。前面提到我们表达了对父母和老师的谢意，此处是表示老师也赠给我们卡片，表达他们的祝愿。故把them---us。

8. 形容词修饰名词，故把wonderfully-wonderful。

9. 句意：最后，我们进行了精彩的表演，唱歌和跳舞。这里是递进的并列关系，不是选择关系，故把or---and。

10. great修饰名词，故把important-importance。