Question

【题目】社交网络高度发达的今天，越来越多的人用手机给自己拍照片并分享到互联网上，请就此现象写一篇150词左右的短文，内容包括:

“自拍”现象	无处不在，日益流行……
流行的原因	展示自我，吸引关注……
	促进交流，增强友谊……
	软件众多，方便使用……
你对“自拍”的看法	……（至少两点）

参考词汇:selfie （自拍；自拍照） application （应用软件）

注意:

1. 词数150左右。开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。

2. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

“Selfie” has become a well-known term across the globe.

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Answer 1

【答案】Today it is not difficult to find social networking pages full of photos people have taken of themselves.

With the rapid development of the Internet, an increasing number of people tend to take selfies and share them on social media, hoping to attract friends’ attention and feedback. Meanwhile, the new interactive communication also helps build a more dynamic friendship. Moreover, the widely used applications which can easily beautify images contribute to more people sharing their selfies online.

Personally, selfie is a popular way of showing themselves, through which some teenagers may gain more confidence and have a chance to make friends. However, when obsessed too much with self images, teenagers may form a wrong viewpoint that recognition and comments from others are more important than life experiences. Therefore, only when we hold the right opinion that selfie is a way of entertainment rather than a part of daily life can we actually take its advantage.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是关于“自拍”现象的议论文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇议论文；社交网络高度发达的今天，越来越多的人用手机给自己拍照片并分享到互联网上，请就此现象，根据表格提示要点写一篇150词左右的短文。人称应为第一、三人称，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：with the rapid development of the Internet（随着互联网的快速发展），tend to（倾向于），take selfies（自拍），attract f ones’ attention and feedback（引起人们的注意和反馈），build a more dynamic friendship（建立更有活力的友谊），personally（个人认为）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。