Question

假如你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国，你们准备为她举办欢送会。请根据以下内容，给她写一封不少于100词的e-mail
写作要点：
1.祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为他骄傲：
2.感谢她帮助你们学习英语；
3.邀请她参加欢送会，并告知欢送会相关事宜。
1）时间：星期六晚六点；
2）地点：阳光俱乐部（the Sun Club）302房间；
3）路线：在她所住宾馆乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。
参考词汇：欢送会 farewell party
邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams.                           
                                                                               
                                                                               
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.
It's a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6：00 p．m.? We'll have dinner together. By the way, you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua

试题分析：本文是一封电子邮件，Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国，写电子邮件邀请她参加欢送会。文章的要点都已经给了出来，考生发挥的余地较小，只需要翻译成英语即可，写作的时候要把所有的要点都包括在内，不要遗漏。同时注意使用被动语态，倒装句等不同的句式，让文章充满变化，不要那么的死板。同时要使用高级的词汇和词组提高文章的档次。
【亮点说明】I am delighted that you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. 这句话用了that引导的宾语从句， We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. 这句话里面的词组be pround of和动词appreciate使用的很好，还有We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.这句话里面含有定语从句，It's a pity that you have to go back soon! 这句话里面用了it做形式主语，that引导真正的主语从句， By the way, you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.