Question

3．请根据下列表格的内容提示，用英语为"SAVE EARTH，SAVE US"的公益广告写一篇解说词．

污染类型	1．空气污染：工厂废气；汽车尾气   2．水污染：倾倒生活垃圾；工厂废水
造成后果	1．物种减少    2．人类健康受损   3．环境恶化
建议措施	（请自己列出若干条）

注意：1．词数：150左右；
2．内容要涵盖上面所列的几条；
3．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
SAVE EARTH，SAVE US
With the development of modern society，pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem．                                         ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，要求根据表格内容用英语表述公益广告解说词，具体信息是以表格的形式给出，考点只需要适当串联即可，在写作的时候一定要使用合适的连接词来连接全文，让文章成为一个整体，同时要注意使用英语句型，也要使用倒装句，定语从句等特殊的句式来提高文章的多样性．关键是要点要全面覆盖，不能有遗漏和省略．写作的时候运用多种表达方式，让句子有变化．
亮点句型一：With the development of modern society，pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem．with的复合结构在句中做状语．过去分词caused在句中做定语修饰pollution．
亮点句型二：Only by working together can we help the environment!本句是一个倒装句，only by working together 状语至于句首，句子要做部分倒装，把情态动词can提到句子前边．

解答 SAVE EARTH，SAVE US
With the development of modern society，pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem．（亮点句型一）
Smoke from factories and gases from vehicles are the main reasons for air pollution．Rivers are polluted when people throw waste into them，or when factories pour waste water into them．As a result，many species are dying out．More and more people are suffering from health problems．【污染的类型及危害】
Enough attention should be paid to this problem and measures should be taken．Firstly，we should make laws to prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers and sending smoke into the air without being dealt with．Secondly，we should raise people's awareness of the serious problem and call on more people to protect the environment．Only by working together can we help the environment!（亮点句型二）【采取措施】

点评 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．