Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你班交换生 Jim 因“新冠肺炎”的爆发无法返校，来信向你咨询相关事宜，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 本学期开学日期推迟，全体学生不得入校；

2. 学校提供在线网课，停课不停学；

3. 在家规律运动，勤洗手，保持身体健康；

4. 如有调整，及时通知。

参考词汇：爆发：outbreak新冠肺炎：novel coronavirus

要求：正文部分不得少于 80 字，可适当增加细节。

Dear Jim，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

It's a pity that you can't return to school because of the outbreak of the novel coronavirus. I'm now writing to tell you more about it.

At present, prevention and control of the virus is the top concern. The opening date of this term has to be delayed. All of the students are not allowed to go to school. To ensure the quality of learning, online education will be provided during the absence from school. By the way, it wouldn't be better if you could work out regularly at home and keep healthy by washing your hands carefully.

If there is any adjustment, I'll keep you informed ahead of time. Wish you good luck!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以李华的身份给交换生Jim写一封回信。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

1. 本学期开学日期推迟，全体学生不得入校；

2. 学校提供在线网课，停课不停学；

3. 在家规律运动，勤洗手，保持身体健康；

4. 如有调整，及时通知。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

the outbreak of the novel coronavirus；prevention and control；online education

第三步：连词成句

1.It's a pity that you can't return to school because of the outbreak of the novel coronavirus.

2.At present, prevention and control of the virus is the top concern.

3.To ensure the quality of learning, online education will be provided during the absence from school.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：提出无法返校原因；上课及防疫方法；表示祝福

2.表示并列补充关系：because of；At present；By the way；and

第五步：润色修改