Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Ù），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。        

The winter holiday are coming, that makes me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I'd like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I'll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don't want me go out. They are afraid I'll be knock down by a truck or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade him.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 are →is

 that→which

 at→to

 movie→movies

 play the→去掉the

 How→ What

 different →differently

 want me∧go→to 

 knock→knocked

 him→them

【解析】

试题分析：本文叙述了作者对于将要到来的寒假做好一个周密的计划，可是却受到他的父母的阻拦，作者有些苦恼，并且要下定决心去说服自己的父母。

 考查主谓一致。因为holiday是单数，所以用is，这里使用进行时表将来。

 考查定语从句。that不能引导非限制性定语从句；which能引导非限制性定语从句。这里which做主语。

 考查固定短语。look forward to是固定短语。

 考查名词。因为movie前有 several修饰应用复数movies.

 考查冠词。play basketball打篮球，球类运动前不用冠词。

 考查感叹句。How感叹形容词、副词或整个句子；What感叹名词。

 考查副词。different是形容词； differently是副词，在这里修饰动词。

 考查固定短语。want sb to do是固定短语。

 考查动词。这里是被动语态故用过去分词knocked.

 考查代词。them指的是作者的父母。

考点：这是一篇短文改错。

点评：文中考查了多个固定短语，形容词、副词、代词及动词等的用法，需要考生有扎实的基础知识。