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6．假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为"What to learn in senior high school？"的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会．请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿．
1．学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2．学会做人：真诚，友善；
3．其他方面：考生自拟．
注意：1．词数120左右；
2．发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总词数．
Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learn in senior high school．In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging．Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently．Personally，I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals．Developing a good habit is also of importance．It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what had been taught after class．
In addition，we should learn how to get along well with others．In school，I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates．It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere．
Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently．They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本文为应用文---写一发言稿，属于提纲作文．在写作时应使用第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时为主．重要短语：challenging （有挑战性的），efficiently （有效地），achieve academic goals （实现学术目标），develop a good habit （养成好的习惯），benefit sb（对某人有利），get involved in（牵扯到，卷入，涉及…..），get along well with（与…..相处融洽）．

解答 One possible version
Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．
       In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging．Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently．Personally，I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals．Developing a good habit is also of importance．【高分句型】It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what had been taught after class．（学会学习）
       In addition，we should learn how to get along well with others．In school，I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates．It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere．（学会做人）
Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently．They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life．（其他方面）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．