Question

18．假如你是李华，学校组织了一项"有烦恼向谁说"的调查活动．请根据调查结果用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关的情况．并阐述你自己的看法．
Dear editor，
Recently our school has carried out a survey-to whom do you go when you are in trouble？The results are as follows：      ．
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表类写作，要求我们仔细看图，根据题目要求写成自己的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：学校组织了一项"有烦恼向谁说"的调查活动．请根据调查结果用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关的情况．并阐述自己的看法．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为描述图表内容．第二部分为作者的观点
重点短语与句型：
carry out实施，执行
in trouble处于麻烦中
have a better understanding of 更好的理解
be faced with 面对
高分句型一：The results are as follows：61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble..此句用了过去分词surveyed作后置定语
高分句型二：The reason for it is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other．此句用了that引导表语从句

解答 Dear editor，
     Recently our school has carried out a survey--to whom do you turn  when in trouble？The results are as follows：61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble（高分句型一）．The reason for it is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other．（高分句型二）22% choose teachers and parents to talk to for the reason that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences．However，there are also 17% who don't share their troubles at all．They say that their troubles are none of other's business and some of them find it hard to get along with others．（描述图表内容）
     As for me，I prefer to deal with my troubles by myself first．When I am faced with troubles，seeking for various ways to settle is my first step．Because sometimes troubles are not so troublesome or challenging as we expected，they can be solved entirely with my efforts．I do like to experience the pleasure．Of course，sometimes I will also turn to my parents or friends for help if the troubles are not within my ability．（作者的观点）
                                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Lihua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧