Question

20．英国Warwickshire学校将组织学生来你校交流学习中文．经安排，Tracy 住在你家．假设你是李华，请你给Tracy写封电子邮件，介绍她来中国后的有关事宜，信的要点如下：
★表达欢迎；
★生活安排：食宿，交通；
★汉语学习：每周一至周五，每天四节课；
★课外活动：文体活动，社会 实践活动．
要求：100字左右；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯
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Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息英国Warwickshire学校将组织学生来你校交流学习中文．经安排，Tracy 住在你家．假设你是李华，请你给Tracy写封电子邮件，介绍她来中国后的有关事宜，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：表达欢迎；★生活安排：食宿，交通；★汉语学习：每周一至周五，每天四节课；★课外活动：文体活动，社会 实践活动． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be delighted to 高兴地去做；arrange for为…安排；As to 至于，关于；including包含，包括； In addition另外，places of interest名胜古迹；Look forward to盼望；
Now let me tell you what has been arranged for you．（高分句型一）
As to Chinese learning，you will attend four classes each day，Monday through Friday，including Oral Chinese，Listening，Reading and Writing．（高分句型二）
Also，I can show you around and take you to some places of interest．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tracy，
       I'm Li Hua．I'm very delighted to learn that you're coming to stay with my family while you're in my school．
       Now let me tell you what has been arranged for you．（高分句型一）During your stay here，we'll provide you with a room of your own with furniture，a TV and a bathroom．Our school is three blocks from my home，so we can cycle to school every day．Lunch is served at the school canteen．A wide variety of Chinese food is to cater to your taste．As to Chinese learning，you will attend four classes each day，Monday through Friday，including Oral Chinese，Listening，Reading and Writing．（高分句型二）
       In addition，you will enjoy colorful school activities in the afternoon．You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming．Also，I can show you around and take you to some places of interest．（高分句型三）If you have further questions，do let me know．Looking forward to your reply．
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．