Question

写作

短文改错

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错误的不要改。

　　Jane was very beautiful young girl, so she was quite

1．________

used to some men show their admiration for her and

2．________

others being shy when they saw her. A summer, when

3．________

Jane was travelling abroad, and she went into a cafe

4．________

in a small town, sat down and waited to be served. The

5．________

young waiter was talking to anyone at the bar when

6．________

she came in, and at first he was not paid any attention

7．________

to her, because he has not looked at her properly. Then

8．________

he turned round end saw how beautiful it was. His face

9．________

went brightly red, and he hurried over to take her order.

10．________

Answer 1

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解析：

1．very前加a　　导解：单数名词girl前要加冠词，此处指“一个女孩”。 　　2．show→showing　　导解：动名词的复合结构作介词宾语，“她习惯了他们对她献殷勤”。 　　3．A→One　　导解：one day/week等作状语，此时不能用冠词代替。 　　4．and删去　　导解：上句when引导状语从句，这一行的she…为主句。 　　5．√ 　　6．anyone→someone　　导解：表示“一个人，某人”，服务员在和人交谈。 　　7．paid→paying　　导解：“他没有注意她”，用主动语态。 　　8．has→had　　导解：与上下文保持一致，用过去完成时。 　　9．it→she　　导解：指Jane． 　　10．brightly→bright　　导解：bright red表示“鲜红的”。