Question

【题目】在英语课堂上，老师要求同学们根据下面的两幅图画轮流发言。请准备一篇发言稿，内容包括：

1.描述图画的内容；

2.揭示图画所反映的主题；

3.针对图画的内容谈谈你的看法。

注意：词数100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】As is shown in the first picture, some white doves are flying over some green trees, while in the next picture they turn gray when they are flying over some chimneys because the trees have been cut down. The pictures warn us of a fact that air pollution is getting serious in some places. In recent years, with the development of science and technology, more and more factories have been built, which give off waste gases that pollute the environment. It is time that we took effective measures to fight air pollution. We should not achieve economic development at the expense of the environment. What is more important to us is a blue sky and a green environment.

【解析】首先审题，这是一篇看图写话类作文。首先观察图画内容，第一幅图画白色小鸟在绿树成荫中快乐的飞翔，第二幅图画小鸟经过空气被污染区域羽毛被染成了黑色，由此我们会想到时下的热点话题空气污染和环保。接下来，继续审题，请准备一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.描述图画的内容；2.揭示图画所反映的主题；3.针对图画的内容谈谈你的看法。考虑用一般现在时，第三人称来写。文章可分三个层次来写：其一描述图画的内容；其二深层次剖析图画想要表达的主题；其三说明自己的看法。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了复合句。例如：使用了同位语从句The pictures warn us of a fact that air pollution is getting serious in some places.和定语从句In recent years, with the development of science and technology, more and more factories have been built, which give off waste gases that pollute the environment..