Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim即将来京，并打算 利用周末时间游览一处北京古代建筑。他发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：

1.你的推荐；2.说明理由。

注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m pleased to learn that you’re coming to Beijing. I’m writing to recommend you an amazing ancient architecture in Beijing—the Summer Palace.

The Summer Palace is located in the western suburbs of Beijing and it’s easy to go there by bus. This ancient royal garden is beautifully composed of palaces, temples, gardens and lakes. It is the largest garden in China, which has been enjoying great popularity. What’s more, the Summer Palace is also the center of cultural and historical relics. I’m sure you will be amazed at the wonderful place.

Finally, I do hope that you will have a good time in Beijing.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向朋友介绍一处北京古代建筑。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表明推荐的地方

2.推荐理由

1）介绍位置。（location）

2）自然风光。（natural scenery）

3）文化历史意义。（cultural and historical meaning）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be pleased to; recommend; be located in; beautifully; be composed of; largest; the center of; have a good time

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m pleased to learn that you’re coming to Beijing.

2. I’m writing to recommend you an amazing ancient architecture in Beijing—the Summer Palace.

3. The Summer Palace is located in the western suburbs of Beijing.

4. This ancient royal garden is beautifully composed of palaces, temples, gardens and lakes.

5. It is the largest garden in China.

6. What’s more, the Summer Palace is also the center of cultural and historical relics.

7. I do hope that you will have a good time in China..

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改