Question

假设你是李华。最近，你校学生会组织开展了“构建低碳校园”活动。请你围绕“节约资源，低碳生活”的主题，根据以下提示，用英语写一封倡议书, 呼吁大家行动起来。
日常出行时怎样减少碳排放；
在餐厅就餐时怎样节约粮食；
在寝室和教室如何节约水、电。
注意：
词数：不少于120词；
倡议书的开头已给出，但不计入总词数；
可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
Our school advocates that we should build a low-carbon campus in order to protect the earth.
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Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear fellow students,
Our school advocates that we should build a low-carbon campus in order to protect the earth.
I think it is everyone’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal. Here is what I think we should do. First of all, we should walk or ride bikes instead of riding in cars or school buses to reduce the amount of pollution. Secondly, when we eat the food in the school cafeteria, we should eat up what we buy and not waste the food. Thirdly, it is important for us to save electricity and water. We should not leave the lights on in the daytime or leave water running after washing. Instead, we should turn off lights as soon as we leave the classroom and dormitories.
In a word, if we can make small changes in our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth! Dear fellow students, let’s start right now and spare no effort to do every little thing we can from now on!
Li Hua

解析试题分析：：这是一篇围绕“节约资源，低碳生活”的主题英语倡议书。倡议对象的称呼已写好。接着是写节约资源的具体措施。主要包括：?日常出行时怎样减少碳排放；?在餐厅就餐时怎样节约粮食；?在寝室和教室如何节约水、电三部分内容。结尾要表示发出号召和希望。最后也可以写上发倡议者的名称。
倡议书的写作，先写对发出倡议对象的称呼。2、正文：（1）写清楚发出此倡议的原因或目的。只有交代清楚倡议活动的目的、意义即重要性，倡议对象才能理解、才能采取自觉的行动来响应，否则就很难响应，起不到倡议应有的作用。（2）重点是写倡议的具体内容和要求及要求做到的具体事项。这部分一般是分条开列，以求清晰、明确。（3）结尾要表示倡议者的决心和希望。（4）最后要写上发倡议者的名称。
【亮点说明】范文使用一些如First of all,Secondly,Thirdly,In a word等承接词进行连接,使文章层次清晰。多变的高级句式如宾语从句的使用Our school advocates that…，表语从句Here is what I think we should do及it作形式主语的句型it is everyone’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal等?高级词汇和短语的灵活运用，如build a low-carbon campus，achieve this goal，sum up，In a word， make a big difference 等
考点：考查应用文倡议书的写作。