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13．假设你是李华，打算明年出国留学．请你根据以下要点提示，给你的美国笔友Lucy写一封电子邮件．
（1）出国留学的打算（如在申请学位课程之前学习一年英语、住在寄宿家庭等）；
（2）出国留学的原因；
（3）期待与她见面．
注意：
（1）词数100 左右（开头已给，不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Lucy，
How are you？
I've decided to study abroad next year．Before applying for a degree course，I will first spend a year focusing on my English，which I think is beneficial to my further study．（高分句型一）Instead of living in student accommodation or an apartment，I'd like to live with a host family，which I think will give me the chance to learn more about the new culture．（高分句型二）As for the main reason why I want to study abroad，the academic benefits come first．Secondly，it will allow me to become independent while studying abroad，because I will have to do everything on my own．
I am looking forward to seeing you then．And I hope you can give me some advice on what I should prepare in advance．（高分句型三）Thank you!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息打算明年出国留学．请你根据以下要点提示，给你的美国笔友Lucy写一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）出国留学的打算（如在申请学位课程之前学习一年英语、住在寄宿家庭等）；（2）出国留学的原因；（3）期待与她见面．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：apply for申请；focus on专注于；be beneficial to对…有益；as for至于，关于；on my own独自；
Before applying for a degree course，I will first spend a year focusing on my English，which I think is beneficial to my further study．（高分句型一）
Instead of living in student accommodation or an apartment，I'd like to live with a host family，which I think will give me the chance to learn more about the new culture．（高分句型二）
And I hope you can give me some advice on what I should prepare in advance．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Lucy，
      How are you？
      I've decided to study abroad next year．Before applying for a degree course，I will first spend a year focusing on my English，which I think is beneficial to my further study．（高分句型一）Instead of living in student accommodation or an apartment，I'd like to live with a host family，which I think will give me the chance to learn more about the new culture．（高分句型二）As for the main reason why I want to study abroad，the academic benefits come first．Secondly，it will allow me to become independent while studying abroad，because I will have to do everything on my own．
      I am looking forward to seeing you then．And I hope you can give me some advice on what I should prepare in advance．（高分句型三）Thank you!
                                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．