Question

【题目】假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习，你计划寒假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e-mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。

内容应包括：

1．旅行信息（如景点、费用等）；

2．当地特色（如食品、风俗等）；

3．注意事项。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to ______

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to ask for information about your agency’s New Zealand’s travel for the winter vacation.

My friend and I plan to travel in the country. Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes? As we know, New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these. Besides, I am also interested in the local food there. How much do I have to pay for the travel? At last, are there other things I should be aware of?

I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

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