Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华,你在很多公共场所经常看见许多成年人和小孩在不停地摆弄手机，请针对这一现象，给全班同学写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：

1.描述现象；

2.分析原因（至少两条）；

3.说明影响；

4.提出建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear fellow students,

The topic of my speech today is about mobile phones.

That’s all.Thank you for your listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear fellow students.

The topic of my speech today is about mobile phones. Nowadays, no matter where we are, we can see many adults and children playing with their phones. This can happen at a bus stop, in a restaurant or in a supermarket. Why is that?

I think two probable reasons may account for this. The first reason is that people are trying to make good use of time. And the second one may be that people show litter interest in what's happening around them. However, focusing only on what's on our mobile phones may not only do harm to our eyes, making us short in eyesight, but also prevent us from communicating normally. What's worse, it's a waste of time to use mobile phones too much,

which may make you addicted. Only when everyone takes this problem seriously can we avoid the bad effects.

Therefore, I think we should put our phones aside and chat with others face to face instead of playing with mobile phones. We can take more outdoor activities and discover the beauty of our life.

That's all. Thank you for your listening.

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。很多人包括未成年人在公共场所使用手机。要求以李华的身份给全班同学学一篇演讲稿描述这一现象、分析原因说明影响并提出建议。所以本文使用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称交替使用。要点：1.描述现象：在很多公共场所经常看见许多成年人和小孩在不停地摆弄手机。2.分析原因并说明影响：人们努力充分利用时间，因为现在手机可以做很多事情。同时也可能是因为对周围事物不感兴趣。长时间使用手机对我们的眼睛有伤害，还可以阻碍我们和现实生活中的人交流。玩手机会让我们上瘾。3.提出建议：把手机放在一边，和身边的人多交流，多参加户外活动，并发现大自然的美景。建议文章分成三段，第一段描述现象，第二段发现原因并说明影响，第三段提出建议。在介绍手机的影响时，可以适当添加个人观点，让文章更丰富。