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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last summer vacation I did some fruit-picking. It was an interesting but pretty hard work. I had to start at 7 am and pick eight hours. But it was such cheerful and full of funny. Some of we had guitars, so in the evenings we had barbecues and play a bit of music together. I only got about $80 a week, but at least they gave me all my meal, and the food was not that awfully. Basic accommodation was also supplying. However, I’m afraid I won’t be going fruit-picking this summer, because I’ve got a temporary job in town what pays better.

Answer 1

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【解析】本文主要讲述暑假作者打工帮助摘水果的经历。

1.an去掉．

考查形容词作表语。interesting作表语，不能加an，故要去掉。

2.添加for.

考查介词。句意：我不得不在早上7点出发，连续八个小时。for+一段时间，表持续多长时间。故添加for .

3.such改为so

考查固定搭配。句意：但它是如此快乐，充满了乐趣。Such+冠词+形容词+名词 ，而so+形容词 。而cheerful为形容词，所以要把such改为so

4.funny 改为fun.

考查名词。funny是形容词不能作full of的宾语，要用名词fun。故要把funny改为fun.

5.we 改为us

考查代词的格。we 是主格，要作Some of的宾主人，宾语要用宾格，we的宾格是us，故把we 改为 us。

6.play改为played

考查谓语动词。根据 we had barbecues and play a bit of music together.，根据本章可知是描述过去的经历，可知谓语动词要用一般过去时，故要把play 改为played。

7. meal 改为meals

考查名词的复数。我每周只有80美元左右，但至少他们提供了我所有的饭菜。从句意可知是all the meals，要用复数。故把meal改为meals .

8.awfully 改为awfull

考查形容词作表语。句意; 食物不是那么糟糕，awfully为副词，不能作表语，故改为形容词awfull

9.supplying 改为supplied

考查被动语态。句意：也提供了基本住宿。根据句意分析，accommodation与supply是被动关系，故supplying 改为supplied

10. what 改为that/which

考查定语从句的关系词。句意：因为我在镇上有一份临时工作，它的薪水更高。 a temporary job 是定语从句的先行词，工作是物，在从句中作主语，可用that/which。而what 引导名词从句。不能引导定语从句，故要把what 改为that/which p