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13．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉． 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
A discussion about hiking had been held in our class．Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier，fresher or more harmonious with the nature．They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature．They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains．But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to，and accidents have happened now and then because a poor knowledge of hiking．Some hikers even lost their life．The other students in our class think it not safe to organize so dangerous activities．They make suggestions what laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities．

Answer 1

分析 本文是对远足活动的讨论．
有些同学认为远足可以让人们更健康，呼吸到更新鲜的空气，和大自然更和谐．但是有些人去一些人类还没有去过的地方，结果出现了危险，甚至丢了性命．所以许多人认为相关法律应该被通过，远足的人在参加活动之前要被培训．

解答 A discussion about hiking hadbeen held in our class．Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier，fresher or more harmonious withthe nature．They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature．They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains．But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to，and accidents have happened now and then because∧a poor knowledge of hiking．Some hikers even lost their life．The other students in our class think it not safe to organizesodangerous activities．They make suggestions what laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities．
1．had改为has．考查谓语动词的时态．下文讲述的是讨论的结果，表示过去的动作对现在造成的影响，所以应该用现在完成时态表示这个讨论，因此had改为has．     
2．or改为and．考查连词．healthier，fresher 和 more harmonious with the nature都是远足的好处，是并列关系，所以or改为and．     
3．删除nature前面的the．考查冠词．nature指大自然，不用冠词．
4．deep改为deeply．考查副词的句法功能．修饰动词attracted用副词deeply．
5．relaxing改为relaxed．考查单词辨析．做表语，修饰主语They，表示"放松的"，应该用relaxed．    
6．ever改为never．考查单词变形．ever表示"曾经"；never 表示"从来没有"．本句表示"人们从来没有到过的地方"，所以用never．     
7．because后接of．考查介词．because后接句子； because of 后接单词或短语，a poor knowledge of hiking是短语，所以用 because of．    
8．life改为lives．考查名词复数．和 their呼应用 life的复数lives，表示"他们的生命"．     
9．so改为such．考查单词辨析．修饰名词短语dangerous activities用such．     
10．what改为 that．考查名词性从句的引导词．laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities．表示"相关法律应该被通过，远足的人在参加活动之前要被培训"，这是 suggestions 的释义，而且句义和结构都是完整的，所以用 that引导这个同位语从句．

点评 考查短文改错．
that引导的名词性从句．that 在名词性从句中，起连词的作用，在从句中不起语法功能，即不作任何成分，也不含有任何意义，引导名词性从句时，不可省略，故称："三不"．