Question

为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了HEART-TO-HEART专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了你自己的困扰；近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。

内容要点如下：

1. 表示理解并给予安慰；

2. 提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1. 词数120左右；

2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：lose temper 发脾气

Hi Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.

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Yours,

Jamie

 

Answer 1

Hi Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

Yours,

Jamie

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求给Worried回一封信，回信的内容主要包括：理解并给予安慰；提出建议。写作时注意信的格式，不要出现拼写和标点错误；多使用定语从句、名词性从句、非谓语动词等语法知识。作文在120词左右，参考词汇必须用上。

亮点说明：范文使用了较多的重点语法知识：宾语从句know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment, how you feel, you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal；表语从句The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods；定语从句when things seem to be going wrong, you’ll regret；目的状语从句so that you may not do or say anything；原因状语从句as physical exercise is an effective way to等，使句子内容非常充实；

范文注意使用First, Second, And third等来表示列举，使行文显得有条理、有层次；

范文使用了一些短语和固定搭配：talk to；a good way of；let out；go outdoors；get rid of；attitude towards；carry on；as normal等，长短句结合，使作文显得错落有致。

考点：书信类作文