Question

请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

作为高三学生的你，最近看了一则公益广告Family且深有感触。请用英语根据下面的图写一篇立志学习，感恩父母的文章,要求简要描述图片所表达的内容并谈谈你的感受。

注意：不少于120词，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

As is vividly shown in the picture, the word family represents three people, who are father, mother and I.

When I was young, father was the most important person in my family.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

As is vividly shown in the picture, the word family represents three people, who are father, mother and I.

When I was young, father was the most important person in my family. My mother took good care of me and protected me from wind and rain. Later I grow up. I take on the responsibility to look after my parents. I realize that the family also means father and mother I love you.

The picture mirrors a common phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern. Undoubtedly, our parents have made a lot of sacrifices. It’s high time we took measures to show gratitude to them.. what’s more, we shouldn’t take our parents’ love for granted. Instead, we are supposed to appreciate it from the bottom of our hearts.

From my point of view, we ought to show our affection to our beloved parents. Now it is time for us to do what we can in return for their hard work. What can we do now is study hard and make progress in our studies. Only in this way can we live up to their expectations and take better care of our aged parents in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：图画作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】范文中提到一些常见的短语took good care of照顾；what’s more而且；take sth for granted 把某事想当然；in return for 作为回报；The picture mirrors a common phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；It’s high time we took measures to show gratitude to them.这个句子考查到it is time that 从句用 should +动词原形或一般过去时；What can we do now is study hard and make progress in our studies.这个句子考查What can we do now引导的主语从句；Only in this way can we live up to their expectations and take better care of our aged parents in the future这个句子中运用到only +状语+部分倒装 。

考点：看图作文