Question

假如你是李华，校园小记者就孩子与家长关系调查结果----大多数孩子都不愿意与家长交流，不愿意告诉家长内心想法的问题来采访你。

1.请你介绍你同学中与家长之间的不和谐状况并分析原因。

2.表明你所希望的孩子与家长的关系，并说明如何才能建立这种关系。

注意：1、词数不少于120个；

2、可适当增加细节；

                                                                               

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, most of my classmates aren’t willing to communicate with their parents or share their inner thoughts with their parents and always find it hard to seek support and advice from them, the reason of which is that they feel that they are not equal in position and parents lay too much emphasis on the children’s study.

In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children are equal and they can show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind , parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their inner feelings frankly. Only in this way can we enjoy a warm relationship between parents and children.

【解析】

试题分析：考查了半开放性作文的写作。本文是关于孩子与家长之间的交流的话题，文章中并没有给出很多的要点，要考生自行组织要点，可以简述这种同学与家长之间的不和谐状况。并解释原因，从家长方面和孩子方面两方面入手。最后要描述你所希望的孩子与家长的关系，并给出之间的建议，如家长和老师沟通，做学生的朋友等。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：本文难度较大，在写作时注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。