Question

【题目】假如你是李华, 你校成立了一个英语俱乐部, 由外教Mr. Smith担任负责人，现在他就俱乐部的活动内容征求成员的意见和建议。请给他写一封信，提出三点建议并说明理由。

注意: 词数100左右。

Dear Mr. Smith,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’ m very happy to know you are in charge of the new English Club. I’m writing to offer my suggestions about the activities that it’ll hold.

First, in my opinion, you can hold some English song contests ,which can not only show our singing talents ,but also attract more students to join us. Second, you can offer us some famous English movies to watch and have us talk about them afterwards, which can improve our English speaking and listening ability. Finally, we can go hiking together, which will help us get close to nature and develop our friendship.

I hope you will find these suggestions useful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求我们写一封信，为学校英语俱乐部的活动内容征求成员的意见和建议。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。但是你的观点要自己组织，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如in charge of，in one’s opinion，not only … but also …，get close to；还运用句型：I’m writing to offer my suggestions about the activities that it’ll hold.和First, in my opinion, you can hold some English song contests ,which can not only show our singing talents ,but also attract more students to join us. 和Second, you can offer us some famous English movies to watch and have us talk about them afterwards, which can improve our English speaking and listening ability.和 Finally, we can go hiking together, which will help us get close to nature and develop our friendship.这四句都运用了定语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如First，Second，Finally，and等等。