Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，是一名高中学生。你的网友Alice是一位美国的学生，近期她要写一篇有关中国的小论文。请你给她写一封e-mail,介绍中国的情况。

内容要点如下：

1.中国位于亚洲东部，有着悠久历史，有许多的名胜古迹;

2.中国有了长足的发展，同时国家一直在采取措施，努力去保护环境;

3.大部分人已经摆脱贫穷，大多数孩子能够接受教育。

注意：

1. 词数100词左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头和结尾已给出。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Alice,

I am glad to give you some information about China.

China is located in eastern Asia. It is a country with a long history, splendid culture and ancient civilization and has an extremely rich historical and cultural heritage. China has developed fast in the past years, and meanwhile China has taken a lot of measures to try to protect the environment. Nowadays, China has gotten rid of poverty and most of the children are receiving good education. China has a lot of places of historical interest that people can visit. Chinese people are very kind and friendly. I hope you can visit China during the holiday.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封电子邮件，介绍中国的情况。这是一篇提纲式作文。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇提纲式作文，内容齐全，语言精练，同时使用高级句子。China is located in eastern Asia.被动语态用在句中；China has developed fast in the past years句中使用现在完成时态；China has a lot of places of historical interest that people can visit.定语从句的运用恰到好处；I hope you can visit China during the holiday.省略ｔｈａｔ的宾语从句。