Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Silina used to dreaming of being a singer and she has relied her confidence to practice singing for 10 years. Although she was turned up by many bands because she was overweight, she never gave up and stuck to sing. At the same time, she has lost weight successful by keeping a balanced diet and exercising regularly, in which has earned her success. Now his voice is familiar to everyone. She attaches great importance on not giving up and working hard! When talked about her past, she said: “Success is not always the easy thing and if we want to succeed, we must devote ourselves to it.”

Answer 1

【答案】1.dreaming-dream

2.relied后加on

3.up-down

4.sing-singing

5.successful- successfully

6.in which去掉in

7.his-her

8.on-to

9.talked-talking

10.the-an

【解析】本文主要讲了Silina过去常常梦想着成为一名歌唱家，因为超重，她被许多乐队拒绝。后来她减肥成功，实现了自己的梦想。

考查固定句型。Silina过去常常梦想着成为一名歌唱家。used to do过去常常做某事，是固定用法，所以dreaming-dream。

考查固定短语。她依靠她的信心练习唱歌十年。rely on依靠，依赖，是固定短语，所以relied后加on。

考查固定短语。因为超重，她被许多乐队拒绝。turn down拒绝，是固定短语，所以填up-down。

考查固定用法。stick to doing坚持做某事，是固定用法，所以sing-singing。

考查副词。修饰动词短语lost weight，用副词，所以successful- successfully。

考查定语从句。which has earned her success.是一个定语从句，修饰整个主句内容，关系词在从句中作主语，用which，所以in which去掉in。

考查代词。这里指“Silina的嗓音”，Silina是女的，所以his-her。

考查固定用法。attach great importance to重视; 高度重视; 非常重视，是固定用法，所以on-to。

考查非谓语动词。talk about与其逻辑主语she之间是主动关系，用现在分词，所以talked-talking。

考查冠词。成功不是一件容易的事情。泛指“一件容易的事情”，且easy首字母发音是元音，所以用不定冠词an，the-an。