Question

目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。

注意：1．词数100左右；

    　2．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long．　　　　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long．Students have different opinions about it．

    Some students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get exposed to society．They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies． Therefore, they have less interest in their studies．Others think schools are the best place to get knowledge, a place where they can learn whole-heartedly without any disturbances．Some students，not mature enough，lack the  ability to  control themselves．Once out of school，they may lose control of themselves and do something bad that will affect their studies．

Personally．it is necessary to keep students at school．At the same time schools should also organize various activities for students to enjoy their school life。

【解析】本文是一个正反观点类的文章，要点都已经清晰的给出了，学生只需要翻译成英语即可。在写作的过程中要注意使用高级词汇，好的连接词，好的句型让文章更流畅。