Question

1．Teenagers杂志Conversation With Brad栏目的负责人Brad收到了李华的一封来信．仔细阅读下面的来信，帮助Brad用英语写一封回信，给出分析并提出合理建议．
Dear Brad，
I'm a student from Xinhua Senior High School．I have some difficulty communicating with my parents．Although I have tried my best，I find it really difficult to make them satisfied…So I feel lonely sometimes．I would be grateful if you could give me some advice．
Yours，
Li Hua
注意：1．可适当增加细节．
2．词数：120-150．
Dear Li Hua，
I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给李华写一封信．帮他分析信中所提及的与父母交流困难的问题并提出合理的建议．
写作时人称以第一和第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．开头； 2．分析与父母交流困难这一问题；3．给出合理建议；4．结尾-总结．
重要短语：be honored to do （很荣幸地做某事），have trouble doing sth（做某事有困难），communicate with（与…交流），lie in（在于），as for（关于），share sth
with sb（与某人分享某物），convince sb （让某人信服），It's one's fault（是某人的错），place high expectations on sb（对某人期望高），be satisfied with（对…满意），as long as（只要），live up to（符合，不辜负），more than（超过，多于），heal sth（治愈某物）．
【高分句型一】
1．I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents．
此处为时间状语从句中的省略，结构为"连词when+现在分词"，可以理解为时间状语从句"when you have trouble communicating with your parents"．
【高分句型二】
2．Therefore，it's a common problem shared by many，①whose cause lies in②what we call"generation gap"．
①此处是由关系代词"whose+名词"引导的定语从句，先行词为"a common problem"．
②此处为连接代词"what"引导的宾语从句，"what"在从句中作宾语．
【高分句型三】
3．I believe they will be satisfied with you①as long as they know you have tried ②whatever you can to live up to their standard．
①此处是由连词"as long as"引导的条件状语从句，主句为"I believe they will be satisfied with you"．
③此处是由连接代词"whatever"引导的宾语从句，连接代词"whatever"在从句中作"can"后省略的动词"do"的宾语．
【高分句型四】
4．Whatever you are，they will always be there for you．
     此处是由连接代词"whatever"引导的让步状语从句，"whatever"在从句中作表语．

解答 Dear Li Hua，?
I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs．（开头）?
I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents．【高分句型一】Almost everybody has it or had it when they were in their adolescence．Therefore，it's a common problem shared by many，whose cause lies in what we call"generation gap"．【高分句型二】?（分析）
As for my advice for you，first，don't hide your feelings．You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents．Second，convince them you have tried your best．It is not their fault to place high expectations on their child．I believe they will be satisfied with you as long as they know you have tried whatever you can to live up to their standard．【高分句型三】?（建议）
Anyway，there is no one who love you more than your parents in the world．【高分句型一】Whatever you are，they will always be there for you．【高分句型四】Love them，and love can heal everything．（结尾-总结）?
Yours sincerely，
Brad

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．