Question

【题目】假如你是光明中学的李华，今年夏天你去农村朋友家玩，看到大量良田被废弃，你觉得很可惜。请你根据下列要点，给某英文报社写一封信，以此呼吁政府采取措施，来解决这一问题。

要点：

1.看到的现象；

2.分析可能的原因: 大量年轻人弃乡进城；干旱的天气；工业污染等。

3.呼吁政府采取措施。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语和结语已为你写好。

Dear Sir or Madam，

I'm I.i Hua, a student from Guangming Middle School.

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Hoping to receive your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, a student from Guangming Middle School. When I went to see a friend in the countryside this summer, I was shocked to find a large quantity of farming land deserted.

The reasons are various. Firstly, the terrible weather caused the land to become too dry to grow crops, and some of it was finally deserted. Secondly, large pieces of farmland have been polluted by the waste water discarded from the factory nearby. In addition, with the development of cities and towns, many young people are choosing to work in cities instead of taking up farm work.

As we all know, food is of great significance for our human beings' survival. Therefore, measures should be taken to stop the farmland being deserted any more. Otherwise, we have no land to grow crops on to feed ourselves in the near future.

【解析】

本文为材料作文。材料要求写你的见闻，分析事情的成因，以及应采取的措施，因此，要用一般过去时和一般现在时。写作时不能遗漏要点，力求表达准确。要适当运用连接词使上下文的连贯，行文流畅，符合文章的逻辑关系。

本文第一段阐述了现象，第二段分析原因，第三段提出措施，要点完整，层次分明，结构严谨，全文结构紧凑。文章中运用了大量的短语为文章增色，如：stop the farming land from being wasted， be shocked to；a large quantity of；caused sth to happen，with the development of。连词firstly…，secondly…,in addition….，therefore和otherwise，把句子连接起来，一气呵成。

文章中简单句与复合句相结合，主动与被动相结合。句式灵活多样，复杂得体。如状语从句When I went to see a friend in the countryside this summer, I was shocked to find a large quantityof …；and引导的并列句the terrible weather caused the land to become too dry to grow crops, and some of it was finally deserted；as引导的非限制性定语从句As we all know, food is of great significance for our human beings' survival。文章中了中也有非谓语的运用，如weather caused the land to become too dry to grow 和waste water discarded from the factory nearby是过去分词作定语；no land to grow crops on是动词不定式作定语。