Question

你的英国朋友Peter正在做一个课题：收集世界各地庆祝生日的方式。他请你介绍中国学生(teenagers)过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信。
一、通常方式
1．父母给孩子过生日，举行家庭或饭店聚餐；或寿星自己组织一个生日聚会，邀请朋友吃饭聊天，唱歌等；生日蛋糕是不可缺少的。
2．亲属、朋友给寿星送生日礼物，并向他／她祝福。
二、简单地说说你认为更有意义的庆祝方式并说明你的理由。
注意： 字数120左右；信的开头已给出。
参考词汇：寿星the birthday person
Dear Peter,
Nice to hear from you. I’m glad to know that you are doing a project and I’d very much like to help you. __________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

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Dear Peter,
Nice to hear from you. I’m glad to know that you are doing a project and I’d very much like to help you. Chinese teenagers celebrate their birthdays in different ways. Some teenagers celebrate their birthdays at home or at restaurant. Usually the birthday person’s parents arrange the family gatherings. Another way is that the birthday person holds a party, inviting his or her friends to have fun drinking, singing and dancing together. A birthday cake is something that can not be spared. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents.
In my opinion, one’s birthday celebration should be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers, cook a delicious meal or do some housework for our parents to express our thanks to them for giving us lives and bringing us up.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

解析试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，材料是考生熟悉的东西，考生不难理解写作的目的和要求，文章的开头已给出。考生重点应认真审题，审题包括几个方面:1.文章的时态2.内容要点。尤其内容要点的把握准确到位。3.考生要尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。
4.考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。
考点：考查学生运用语言的能力和语言的组织能力
点评：本题难度适中。命题人作文的要点没有一一列出，既给了学生的思维空间，又给了学生发挥自己的语言组织的能力的空间，没有把学生的思维控制在某些要点的组织上。