Question

假定你是李华。最近西安的雾霾（ smog）严重地影响了人们的生活。请你根据写作要点用英语给校报写一篇稿件。

????????????? 写作要点：1．雾霾带来的危害；

????????????? 2．你的建议；

????????????? 3．你的希望。

????????????? 注意：1．短文词数不少于100；

2．开头部分已写好，不计人总词数

????????? 3．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

??? Recently Xi'an has often seen the heavy smog weather, which has done great harm to our daily life．

 

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Recently Xi’an has often seen the heavy smog weather, which has done great harm to our daily life. Due to the heavy smog many traffic accidents happened, and some people got injured and some even lost their lives. Besides, more and more people who are suffering symptoms related to smog have to go to see the doctor.

Now that we have realized the great harm caused by the smog, we should take measures to reduce the smog. It is vital to make it by educating people especially factory owners to raise their awareness of protecting the environment. People should go to work by bus or by bike if possible instead of driving and plant more trees to absorb and clean the polluted air. Only in this way can we save ourselves from the smog.

I sincerely hope all the citizens in Xi?an can work together to do something to save the air we breathe every day.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中应用一些常见的短语done great harm to对。。有害； Due to由于； lost their lives.失去生命；take measures to采取措施做某事； instead of而不是。Recently Xi’an has often seen the heavy smog weather, which has done great harm to our daily life.这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句。Now that we have realized the great harm caused by the smog, we should take measures to reduce the smog.这个句子中now that是连词既然。Only in this way can we save ourselves from the smog.这个句子用了倒装结构。

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