Question

11．请以Traffic and Safety 为话题写一篇100词左右的发言稿．
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Hello，classmates．I promise to do my part to maintain the road safety．                     

Answer 1

分析 本文为半开放性写作．要求以交通安全为话题写一篇发言稿．仅仅有话题规定而无具体内容提示，需要自行发挥丰富文章内容．考生注意文章的条理要清晰，适当使用连接词．审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，人称使用一人称．
重要短语：
due to，因为，put emphasis on，强调，reckless driving，粗心驾驶，regardless of，不管，不顾．
高分句子：
1．Records show that every year a lot of people die in traffic accidents．本句含有重要句型Records show that，记录表明．
2．so many people violate traffic regulations that we cannot put too much emphasis on the importance of traffic safety．
本句为含that　引导的宾语从句，we cannot put too much emphasis on the importance of traffic safety来解释说明句子内容．
3．Only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．本句中，only引导的条件状语从句，后面主语需倒装．

解答 Hello，classmates．I promise to do my part to maintain the road safety．（点明发言话题）
　　Traffic safety is everybody's business．Records show that every year a lot of people die in traffic accidents．（高分句型）Some of the accidents are due to mechanical problems．
　　However，most of them are the results of careless and reckless driving，and could be avoided．a lot of people disregard traffic signals and rules．they drive regardless of speed limits，run through red lights，drive in the wrong direction，talk and laugh while driving，and turn as they wish without giving signals．they don't slow down while approaching crossroads．so many people violate traffic regulations that we cannot put too much emphasis on the importance of traffic safety．（高分句型）
　　Only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．（高分句型）
　　That　is　all，thank　you．（结束语）

点评 对于开放式作文，考生写作时，可以选取能运用熟悉的英语词汇、句型的点进行展开，对于没有把握的地方，要灵活变通；要尽量运用多样化的句式，注意长短句的结合、简单句和复合句的结合；要注意上下文的衔接，过渡要自然；还要注意书写规范，做到卷面干净，字迹清晰．