Question

【题目】假定你是李华，目前正在帮助你们班新来的英国交换生Eric学习汉语。因为有事，你不得不推迟原定于本周六下午的学习辅导。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 补救办法。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric,

I’m sorry to say that I can’t help you with your Chinese learning this Saturday afternoon. This morning my parents asked me to visit my grandparents on Saturday. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we make it this Sunday afternoon? If it’s convenient for you, I’d like to meet you at your home at 3 pm. If not, let me know what time would be better. I will be free any time on Sunday.

Sorry again for the change.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，就计划的改变进行解释和补救。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般将来时。

要求：1. 表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 补救办法。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be sorry to do ; help you with your Chinese learning ；visit my grandparents; cause you too much trouble; make it this Sunday afternoon; be convenient for you ; If not; be free

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m sorry to say that I can’t help you with your Chinese learning this Saturday afternoon.

2. This morning my parents asked me to visit my grandparents on Saturday.

3. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

4. Shall we make it this Sunday afternoon?

5. If it’s convenient for you, I’d like to meet you at your home at 3 pm.

6. If not, let me know what time would be better.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改