Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，计划寒假找份兼职工作。下面的招聘广告引起了你的注意，请根据要点（箭头所指内容）写一封申请信。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；

3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’ve read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children’s winter camp.

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Yours

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Possible versions:

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’ve read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children’s winter camp. I’m very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job.

To begin with, I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter. Besides, I have been a helpful assistant for both my English teacher and my classmates. More importantly, I can speak English fluently, which will help me work with native teachers from England. I will be available for the work on evenings and weekends and can start working from the end of this term. I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：假定你是李华，计划寒假找份兼职工作。下面的招聘广引起了你的注意，请根据要点（箭头所指内容）写一封申请信。这是一篇明显的提纲作文，就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求，那么文体应为书信文体，即介绍主要行程；又根据“你是李华” 写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李华；时态主要用一般现在时即可或一般将来时。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。

本文语言凝练，论点鲜明，条理层次清晰。文章第一段就开门见山介绍自己想应聘的愿望。第二段具体介绍了自己的情况，第三段表达自己的愿望。文章使用了插入语To begin with首先，more importantly更重要的是；which引导的非限制性定语从句More importantly, I can speak English fluently, which will help me work with native teachers from England.（更重要的是，我会流利地说英语，这能够帮助我和那些来自英国本地的工作者一起工作）；固定句型的灵活应用I have no problem working evenings and weekends.（我在周末或晚上工作没问题）。高级短语和结构：be available for便于，qualify for因……而称职。最后一句使用look forward to doing sth期待做某事，给文章一个完美的结束。