Question

【题目】最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。

1.你校开展课外活动的情况以及你参加的课外活动；

2.为同学选择课外活动提出建议；

3.为学校开展课外活动提出建议。

注意：词数100左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

After-class Activities

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good.

Here I have some suggestions. To students, you’d better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.

Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve your learning.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出。根据所给要点，文章可分三段写：第一段讲述你校开展课外活动的情况以及你参加的课外活动；第二段提出你对选择课外活动的建议；第三段对学校开展课外活动提出建议。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：词数100左右。

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