Question

16．假设你是红星中学的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记，记述上周六你和父母一起参加奥林匹克森林公园健步走活动的过程．
注意：1．词数不少于60；
2．周记的开头已给出，不计入总词数．     
Last Saturday，I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called"I Walk，and I'm Fit．"

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Then，we gathered at the starting point，stretching arms and legs to prepare ourselves for the coming long distance walking．于是，我们在起点集合，舒展手臂和腿为即将到来的长距离徒步走作准备，
高分句型二：
Soon，a signal was given and off we went along the walking route，which ran around the park．
很快，信号发出，我们就沿着行走路线开始徒步，那条路是沿着公园的．
句型一 stretching arms and legs to prepare ourselves for the coming..该部分是现在分词短语在此处作伴随状语，表明该动作与主语谓语动作同时或几乎同时发生，且表主动
句型二 which ran around the park 该句是which作关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中充当主语，替代前面的先行词walking route

解答 Last Saturday，I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take in an activity called"I walk，and I'm Fit"．
   Arriving early in the morning，we were surprised to find many participants of different ages already waiting excitedly at the registration place．We joined them．Then，we gathered at the starting point，stretching arms and legs to prepare ourselves for the coming long distance walking．（高分句型一）Soon，a signal was given and off we went along the walking route，which ran around the park．（高分句型二）Some people walked briskly，while others just took their time to enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful natural scenery．（介绍运动）
   After more than one hour's walking，we finally reached the finish line．The 5 km journey was challenging but really enjoyable．My parents and I cheered each other for our success．Regular activities like this not only keep us fit，but also help get us closer to each other and to nature．（运动好处）

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