Question

5．假设你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教（tutor） 的广告，欢迎中国学生参加． 请写一封电子邮件申请参加．
内容主要包括：
1．自我介绍（包括中英文能力）；
2．参加意图（帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化）；
3．希望获准．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总次数．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a senior middle school student from China．I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet，employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language．（高分句型一）Iam interested in it．I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job．
For me，Chinese is my native tongue and I'm excellent at it．Besides，I've been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English．（高分句型二）I'm willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well．
I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours．
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 1．这是一篇提纲作文，内容是写一封电子邮件申请参加国际中学生组织在美国举办的夏令营．
2．电子邮件的主要内容首先是自我介绍及自身英语能力；其次是参加意图，主要是为了介绍中国以及了解其他国家；最后是表达自己希望获得批准．
3．注意电子邮件的格式，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称．
4．应注意语言的准确性和符合题意性，文章中可能用到的主要词汇及句型有：be interested in，would like，take part in，What is more，be able to，looking forward to your reply等．
I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet，employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language．（高分句型一）
Besides，I've been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear sir or Madam，
      I'm Li Hua，a senior middle school student from China．I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet，employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language．（高分句型一）I am interested in it．I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job．
      For me，Chinese is my native tongue and I'm excellent at it．Besides，I've been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English．（高分句型二）I'm willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well．
      I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours．
      Looking forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．